Friday, October 14, 2011

Our versions of magic of the brain

Read the first part of Josh's poem. Please leave helpful comments.

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6 comments:

  1. AnonymousOctober 15, 2011 at 10:19 AM

    I like how you have copied the structure of the poem by Jenny Joseph. You have chosen words so well that I have a clear picture in my head from your description. Great writing!
    Mr Winter

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  2. AnonymousOctober 19, 2011 at 3:55 PM

    best 70 out of 71 level 3



    alex

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  3. AnonymousOctober 19, 2011 at 4:21 PM

    75 out of 78 96.2%



    alex

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  4. AnonymousOctober 19, 2011 at 4:23 PM

    75 out of 78 96.2%



    alex

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  5. AnonymousOctober 19, 2011 at 4:49 PM

    I really wish I was tasting the food.


    Alastair

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  6. AnonymousDecember 6, 2011 at 11:29 AM

    I WOULD HATE TO BE THE PREY THE LIONS CHASING

    CASEY

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