Friday, October 21, 2011

Have a look at some of our poems.  Here's Casey-Leigh and Dillan's introduction:


Do you like the imagery in Jack's poem? I really like Josh's surprising and funny poem ending...did it surprise you? Georgie has written this poem. How has she used the structure of the Magic of the Brain to help her write her own poem? Great poem Reilly! You have thought really hard about your word choices in your poem. Which of Ollie's lines is the most descriptive? Can you think of a funny/surprising line for him to end his poem? Which of Alex's lines is your favourite?
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2 comments:

  1. AnonymousOctober 21, 2011 at 10:11 AM

    Alex's poem is very good. Lots of good ideas and similies.Well done
    Alex's Mum

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  2. AnonymousDecember 6, 2011 at 11:30 AM

    I THINK OLLIES IS REALLY GOOD

    CASEY

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